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On the one hand, having a gap year before attending university will definitely be beneficial to us. Before starting university studies, we endured too much pressure and confess from study and peer students, and after attending university we will undoubtedly devoted ourselves to various subjects and researches again. Therefore, this period of time is golden time for us to get to know what we want, what we really interested and what our life goal is regardless of any pressure and any disturbing things. Besides, working or traveling for a year before attending university also helps develop our interpersonal skills. When we work in or travel to one place, we will unavoidably interact with different people, which may invisibly develop our social character. What is more, a gap year helps broaden our horizon since we can travel to some where we have never been to before, experience what we have never experienced, such as watching a sunrise or sunset at the top of a mountain, traveling around the Europe, applying for an internship that we are interested in, finishing a team task with workmates…


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