七． 不间断句子(Run-on Sentences)
例１． There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
剖析：这个句子包含了两层完整的意思：“There are many ways.” 以及“We get to know the outside world.”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或：
There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside
八． 措词毛病(Troubles in Diction)