在托福写作中,给考官一个好的写作开场白是很重要的,正如我们所说的“第一印象”。那么托福写作”第一印象“怎么留?

  1、不能有单词拼写错误

  From the reading passage, we know that in recent years, many prestigious American colleges have developed substantial and often highly structured core curricula.

  2、不能有语法错误

  When talking about cultivating the children, there are two different ways in countryside or in the big city.

  上面的句子中,when后面的talk应该加上ing, 这先入为主的错误已经深深地映入了考官的脑海中,接续下来你写得再好也较难逆转考官对你作文的印象了。要在写作中没有语法错误,大家可以在蘑菇夺分练习写作,并找老师批改自已的作文。

  3、描述不清楚

  有些考生写完引言段以后连自己都不知道自己写得什么,想表达一个什么问题。

  比如:

  Compare the various society什么意思?, past society is not suited to modern society such as the social system in the past is different from now. In the history of China, most of people about hundreds of years were feudalism, included women boot-binding from early age. Some of the old society system are ridiculous, there is no useful to learn it.

  站在考官的立场上,看到此段的第一句话,就会让考官皱眉头,因为无法理解此考生要重点写什么内容。

  4、标点符号乱飞

  这点最能体现出考试时候的紧张情绪!本来时间就紧再加上慌乱,课堂中老师所讲到的标点用法完全不知道了,标点符号乱用。考官会很郁闷,这到底是句什么话呀?所以结果只有一个,考官已经没有任何信心再读下去了。

  托福写作”第一印象“怎么留就是这样的,希望大家借鉴这些写好作文。