2015年9月全国英语等级考试三级真题:写作B
【高分范文】
Lori Schneider, a 53-year-old woman, is the first person with multiple sclerosis to scale the highest mountains on the Seven Summits. It's actually a difficult thing, even for a healthy man. How on earth did she overcome fear?
Firstly, we should learn to calm down while meeting some urgent situations. Fear may bring physical and mental torture. If we are in panic, the chance of success will slip away.
Secondly, it's important to know certain ways to conquer fear. Psychological hint is a good way. Just as Lori Schneider did, you can repeat to yourself "Don't let fear in."
Finally, we should think over the situation. Asking for help may be beneficial. Of course, most of the time we must depend on ourselves.
In a word, we should have a strong mental quality to conquer fear. We need learn to be stronger.
【写作点金】
这是一篇总结文章观点并表达自己观点的作文。首先要明确题目的要求:总结文章内容,再表达自己的观点。这就要求考生首先要总结文章的大意,然后在抓住中心思想的基础上提出自己的观点。在总结观点时候,要简明扼要;在表达自己观点的时候,要条理清晰,分点叙述。
【高频词句】
on earth到底,终究
calm down冷静
in panic恐慌
slip away溜走
depend on依靠于,取决于